divendres, 5 de juny del 2015

Correction of writing

In my opinion the world is a bad place because since we evolved from the other species we become a bad specie. We still watching how poor people die because they stay without eat a couple of days. On the opposite we can see how rich people waste the food.

First, I think the world is dominated by programmed obsolescence because practically everyone on a developed country trhow the old stuff because the neighbour haves better things.

Second, the rich people can make a better soon with genetic enginering , making more differencies between rich and poor.  In conclusion, we have to change our mentality because our planet is going to be a dump on every place. When you see people in poor countries, they live with the garbage. If everyone makes three big actiones to save the planet we could see a clean planet, it's hard but not imposible if everyone tries to reduce the gap between two worlds, rich and poor.



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