2ND POST . My ENGLISH COMPETENCE in 2016

I don't have a better or worst post because I can't know if it's better or not. But I think this is good. I think is one of the best posts because I learnt how to write "good "and efficient. I have chosen this because I corrected some mistakes, comparing to other posts. I think it's one of the best because I expent more time comparing to other posts ( On this therm I have expent more time doing the blogspot) and I think it's better.

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I 'm going to talk about Call of duty franchise. There are a lot succesful games of this company but I think there are overrated because always are the same game just changing the title. I played the new videogames but there are not special. While I was playing I don't was bored but I prefer playing other games. A few days after I played the old Call of Dutys and they were better on all the aspects not only in amusement, the old games give you a better feeling, now it seems they want to make money at all costs. Yesterday I saw the new Call of Duty and I think it can be interesting but only for one reason. Call of Duty Infinite Warfare will hace Call of Duty Modern Warfare 4 ( in my opinion the best videogame on playstation 3). Why I buy this new videogame if I'm interesed on the remasteritation, simply, because the only way to obtain it is buying the new for 100€.

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1ST POST. My english progress from 2013-2016

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The link to the newest post

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I can see a some differences of course I improved a lot but the best improvement is in the speed while I'm writing. Some time ago I expend more than 25 minutes to do a post but now I do a better job in half time. I think the key to improve my level of english is watch movies and series in english because you understand a lot of new words which they will be usefull

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 the link to the  first oral presentation

the link to the newest oral presentation


I see some differences for example, the subject faults sometimes because a few months ago I have been doing this fail too but on an exam I understood this fail. I remember the first presentation was poor because I did it without knowing how to do it and the last presentation was poor too but because on the presentation of research paper they said me this presentation don't needs photos but in english I think maybe it could be good.

Correction of Writing: "Do you prefer living next to university or not"

It's better to live next to the university, it doesn't matters if it's at home or on the campus. But if someone has to live next to the campus probably it will be next to the campus just for have autonomy on his life. People who lives far from the university will be rent a flat beacuse it's better than go on a bus or a train everyday because it burns a lot. And when you are not comfortable on the university you will give up your studies. The university is an age to pass your adolescense and become a man or a woman. But another point to see it's the expensive enrolment which decides if you can live on a flat at the university or live at your partners home.

Relationships: "Would you forgive your partner if they cheated on you?"

Would you forgive your partner if they cheated on you?

First of all I can't imagine myself in a situation like this because before I would have spoken with her. What I would say is: "Before we cheat us, we have to break and we have to understand it". Of course if I don't feel anything for my girlfriend I'll break up and on the contrary I hope she'll break up with me because we don't have to hurt each other, it's simply just breaking and finding another person who loves you.  I think it's better the truth than a lie for my benefit. 
I will forgive her as a person because It's something normal the attraction on other persons but I won't forgive her because she deceived me from the beginning. Another reason that I'm not going to forgive my girlfriend is because I can't trust on her again. I imagine a situation: My partner cheated me before and I forgive her but now she is late and I don't know where she is, I don't wanna think that...

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In my opinion we shouldn't marry because you are obligated to stay with that person the rest of your life, if you don't divorce. You shouldn't be obligated to stay with someone... Because if you don't love him or her you are on a trouble. I think people can stay with someone without being married. In case you find your soulmate (very difficult task) you won't find her the only attractive woman.

Human Rights

Human rights are inherent to all human beings, whatever our nationality, place of residence, sex, national or ethnic origin, colour, religion, language, or any other status. We are all equally entitled to our human rights without discrimination. These rights are all interrealated, interdependent and indivisible. Human Rights were created in 1948, to make a document of international human rights law. After the world wars. There are thirty. I'm not familiar with article #13, Freedom to move. This human rights are not respected everywere, an example of it are the refugees, they can't live in Europe because there are rejected. An example of repecte of this article is in Spain, we live in a country without discrimination to people who comes from another country and stays to live hear.

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Correction of writing

In my opinion the world is a bad place because since we evolved from the other species we become a bad specie. We still watching how poor people die because they stay without eat a couple of days. On the opposite we can see how rich people waste the food.

First, I think the world is dominated by programmed obsolescence because practically everyone on a developed country trhow the old stuff because the neighbour haves better things.

Second, the rich people can make a better soon with genetic enginering , making more differencies between rich and poor.  In conclusion, we have to change our mentality because our planet is going to be a dump on every place. When you see people in poor countries, they live with the garbage. If everyone makes three big actiones to save the planet we could see a clean planet, it's hard but not imposible if everyone tries to reduce the gap between two worlds, rich and poor.

The real story of the Little Red Hood

Once upon a time in New York, Big red ridding hood was smoking weed. Suddenly, her phone rang. It was costumer, her grandmother. She wanted some meth. She taked the truck, because she used to drive a car, but the detective wolf caught her with the car.
When she crossed the street, she spelling the wolf. He asked: What is she doing? She answered nothing. After that, she ran away and a pursuit starts. Big red ridding hood jumped off a bridge and the wolf stayed back. Suddenly when she meet the grandmother, the biggest distrbutor in the city. She gave the commision to her. But the wolf was with the SWATS and a gunfire started in the slum. After that, a lot of people were dead and a big explosion killed everyone.
Finally, Little Red Ridding hood past up because she had a nightmare. She was in a mad house. The madhouse anesthetized her because the wood cutter vaped her when the wolf was eating her grnadmother in front of her.

My oral presentation

The last wednesday I presented an oral presentation with Ali. In tjhe presentation we were speaking about the Russefeiring. I saw the presentation and I have a bad pronunciation, I was nervous, but after i thought everyone was nervous.
I saw the power point and was simple and bad organized because the images were too small. I will make a better presentation the next term, I think the russefeiring was a bit hard find information.

I think my mark is 6,9. My pronunciation failed a lot and that's why I think that's the final mark. I think the best part is the content because I said all in the presentation about the russefeiring, all what can I find,.

Email to the teacher

1st Email:

I did my objective the last year, lose 26 kg doing box 2 hours daily. My objective now is approve baccalaureate. I think it’s excessive the change from 4th of Eso to 1st of Baccalaureate, but it’s not impossible. Before I studied a bit, now I study 4 hours daily for understand all, without count the time of homework. This year I will approve PET. 

My favorite hobby is the sport. I train 2 hours daily. I forgot the computer games and the PlayStation. I expend my free time with friends going to the cinema or other places. 

2nd Email:

Presentation:

Hi,  My name is Javier Garcia Diaz I'm 16 years old.I did my objective the last year, lose 26 kg doing box 2 hours daily. My objective now is approve batxillerat. My favorite hobby is the sport. I train 2 hours daily. I forgot the computer games and the PlayStation. I spend my free time with friends going to the cinema or other places. I will be a scientist, but i'm not sure about what field. I like Science Fiction movies and  the Scary movies too. 

My objective: 

I think it’s excessive the change from 4th of Eso to 1st of batxillerat, but it’s not impossible. Before I studied a bit, now I study 4 hours daily for understand all, without count the time of homework. This year I will pass

PET. My objective is pass batxillerat with good notes, I need good notes for study at university. I will be a better student this year. 

My summer: 

I had a relaxing summer, but I saw movies and series in English. Sometimes I went to the beach with my friends. I stayed 2 weeks in Andalucia with my cousins.